Silence of Loneliness

A close friend of mine wrote a poem about the silence of loneliness that we all experience living with grief.

He wanted to turn the poem into a song so used AI to give him some melody ideas to use before he got round to recording it with his band.

Silence

Silence hurts, I say I am fine,
Yes, it’s a lie, but it’s hard to explain
The heavy weight of God’s design,
The secret ache of a hidden pain.

I keep the words deep inside my chest,
To save them from the storms I bear,
But keeping the peace is a lonely test,
When no one knows the grief down there.

Yet quiet nights eventually clear,
The heavy clouds begin to part,
As gentle grace replaces fear,
And brings a stillness to my heart.

Been sombre times, when darkness filled my pining heart.

Yet with each new dawn, old sol fed light and warmth into my injured soul.

There is a very special other who would see my pain

And no doubt approves the emotional warmth that I am starting to feel.

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Hi @Heartbroken12
Your friend is very talented
and the words are lovely and so true
Give him my best wishes
Thank you for sharing the song.

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Hi Heartbroken
I also wrote a poem to my Partner Theresa who passed away in March. We had been together for 35 years . I let a friend read my poem and he asked if I wanted it put to music, I wasn’t sure . But I said ok. He done it through his AI programme as well, I couldn’t believe the way it turned out, it’s very emotional.
He said he typed in my lyrics and asked it to be respectful and emotional, The AaI programme is amazing,

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